Aha, so you caught that! Good eyes! I was actually planning to insert that scene at the end, where she flips to the back and goes "OMG, I was talking to Gemcity!" but I didn't like the way it affected the flow (read: I forgot to put it in, and now I'm not sure if I should change it after so many people have read it XD). Seriously, I wasn't expecting this kind of response.
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Date: 2009-10-18 05:57 am (UTC)Thanks for reviewing!