First ficlet

I'm new to the community and this is my first attempt at writing anything in NCIS fandom. Basically, last night I had a dream about Tony and Tim getting together, and unfortunately I can't remember a lot of it, but part of it was that Tony decided to stop calling McGee "probie" and use his actual name more often.

I decided to write down this part, and maybe/hopefully I can expand it more in the future.

Title: Elevator Conversations
Author: [livejournal.com profile] rainbow_goddess
Pairing/characters: McGee/DiNozzo implied, but the characters in this story are Gibbs and Dinozzo
Rating: G
Length: 185 words
Disclaimer: No copyright infringement intended.
Summary: What if Gibbs guessed that Tony and McGee were a couple?


Tony stepped into the elevator with his boss, just as he'd done hundreds, if not thousands, of times before. This time, however, Gibbs hit the "emergency stop" button.

"Dinozzo," Gibbs said.

Tony gulped, not knowing – but suspecting – what his boss wanted. "Yeah, boss?"

"About you and McGee."

"What about me and McGee?" Tony asked.

"You've stopped calling him 'probie,'" Gibbs observed.

"That's because he's not a probie anymore."

"That's been the case for a few years now, and it never stopped you before."

"Well, Ziva is the probie now," Tony answered.

"You've also started using his first name more often. You've started calling him Tim," Gibbs continued.

"He calls me Tony all the time. Why shouldn't I call him Tim?"

"No reason," Gibbs replied, "except that you never did before."

Tony shrugged nervously. "People change all the time, boss."

"That they do," Gibbs said softly as he restarted the elevator.

The elevator arrived at its destination, and Tony was about to step out when Gibbs said, "Dinozzo" again.

"What now, boss?"

Gibbs smacked Tony on the side of the head. "Don't hurt him."

END (for now, at least)

[identity profile] murgy31.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
I loved this!

[identity profile] flame227.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 05:08 am (UTC)(link)
Awww! Cute - and so Gibbs!
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[personal profile] catwalksalone 2010-01-17 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
Hi! And welcome. I've made you an author tag and added other tags to your post. If you could use the comm tagging system for future posts (of which I hope there'll be plenty :D ) I'd be very grateful as it makes life easier for all comm members. Thank you!

[personal profile] samueljames 2010-01-17 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Love the way a small change was obvious to Gibbs. Lovely.

[identity profile] mezzo-cammin.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, very nice! I hope you write more of these!

[identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 02:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, this was cute. Loved the fact that Gibbs wasn't mad, just being protective of Tim.

[identity profile] grissoms-girl.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
This was goood, loved it, thanks.

[identity profile] jumpuphigh.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Very sweet. I loved it. I can't wait to see more from you!
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