Hi again. I think there are a lot of people out here looking for good stories about McGee. Trust me there are enough of them out here that are poorly written! So, when a good story comes along you're bound to get feedback.

I say edit your story if you feel you want to - even if it's been read by fandom. You can always repost it, just update stating that the only difference is the last few paragraphs. I've done that. I've seen other writers do it too. That way, if people are curious but don't want to reread it all, they can just go to the portion that was changed.

I hope you keep writing!